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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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like a swedish masseur on a cruise line squeezing toward horizon’s midway point buoyant strokes of spongy words stood, like desperate souls…frozen choice sighing like an aristocrat properly fleshed out with leadership screaming like a tow truck in pink summer masculinity bearing that glint tinge, of knowing the way around a woman’s body action snapshots, pulls out a wallet of astonishing revelations…plunging plunging into synchronized worship songs an intention of giving, softly and calmly openhanded, a cozy looking place with surprising agility & childhood fantasy dancing mutual desire with reliance like a flammable fuselage, bursting fragile rawness a cool wind taxing down emotions without a filibuster face off of self deception there is still a lyrical quality taking a breath, writing thoughts all together i seize bright sunlight’s narrative configuration overlooking the countless stories that failed for what is past, is prologue, weeping tears of joy meeting a focused event, ascribing prospect leaving info structure, wide open and dark gold [This message has been edited by LeeJ (09-26-2005 10:48 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: ... synchronized worship songs... what a treat! Once again your poetry contains shades of colors no others seem to be able to see. Love, Margherita  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Lee! To click on one of your titles, I know I am going into a "Promised Land" of fine poetry.  A mind is a terrible thing to waste! ~ and you obviously are not wasting yours! You are one mighty talented poetessa! May your day promise to be a good one! ~ and may it deliver! Hugs with love, Linda |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
There's only one word for your poems and that's ... "amazing". I know I've said it before so let me change it to "totally amazing". |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sitting here nodding my head, with a slight smile.. acknowledging your superb talent. Monday hugs to you m'friend. ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I'll go with Helen...you ARE amazing!!  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Excellent write! Eric |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sounds like you have put the whole of piptalk right here in this great poem.  .....jo |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
choice sighing like an aristocrat properly fleshed out with leadership screaming like a tow truck in pink summer masculinity bearing that glint tinge, of knowing the way around a woman’s body Lee J, I like it all, but this part really stood out at me. Like the others, Hon, I think your writing is amazing. Hugs, Ethel  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read....James |
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