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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

0 posted 2005-09-25 09:49 AM

Dance of freedom

* * *

Oh, to feel
this mighty motion
of my heart!
As if stirred by
atavistic propulsion,
it leaps out of
its matter anchored center
and heads towards
ethereal dancing floors.

No count down,
no rigid scheme of steps,
no harsh voices
dictating rhythm and moves,
no iron strings
to keep me
on prefixed trails.
All I need is some lace
and wings of butterfly.
There is this inner tune,
a blend of sounds
like songs of nightingales,
of melting icicles
of summer lawns
and falling leaves.

A breeze of renewal
carries my heart
above leveled grounds
to soar high across
realms unknown,
to take part in creation
and to joyfully perform
its dance of freedom,
in hushed devotion
to the original sounds
of all permeating love.
Thus my heart flies
in genuine attempts
to be its own choreograph.

Do not try therefore
to tear my heartstrings,
but join me and soar
across eternity,
dancing forevermore
this infinitely rewarding
dance of freedom.

* * *

Love, Margherita

xFromtheHeartx
Member

since 2005-09-24

Posts 80
Florida U.S.

1 posted 2005-09-25 11:10 AM

i like i like!

StevenS
Senior Member

since 2005-09-21

Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)

2 posted 2005-09-25 11:28 AM

I have never attended a ballet, untill now. Bravo balarina your grace and beauty is breathtaking. Encore! Encore!

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2005-09-25 12:01 PM

All I need is some lace
and wings of butterfly.
There is this inner tune,
a blend of sounds
like songs of nightingales,
of melting icicles
of summer lawns
and falling leaves.

Oh yes.....how lovely!!
Very much enjoyed this ~ hugs, Chris

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2005-09-25 12:59 PM

Dear Margherita ~

Thank you for the lace and the wings of a butterfly!

This dance of freedom sets spirits free to soar across realms unknown!

Linda

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

5 posted 2005-09-25 01:29 PM

This was very nice. Thanks so much for sharing. and i liked that smily,

and the picture very lovely...

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Sharksbean
Member

since 2005-09-25

Posts 368
jax

6 posted 2005-09-25 01:31 PM

Wonderful work...Sharksbean

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2005-09-25 02:48 PM

"All I need is some lace
and wings of butterfly.
There is this inner tune,
a blend of sounds
like songs of nightingales,
of melting icicles
of summer lawns
and falling leaves."

I am soaring with you after reading this truly inspirational writing, Margherita!

.....jo

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

8 posted 2005-09-25 04:05 PM

Margherita, grazie per questo ballo poetica.

M xx

~i want for myself your trembling~

Rick
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

9 posted 2005-09-25 04:32 PM

Dear Margherita, could I have the next dance, its sounds so wonderful, very much enjoyed my friend.

Sincerely
Rick

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

10 posted 2005-09-25 05:32 PM

Very beutiful, Margherita.
I alsways love your poetry.
Hugs,
Ethel

Sharksbean
Member

since 2005-09-25

Posts 368
jax

11 posted 2005-09-25 10:38 PM

that was nice i liked it

Dragon Mistress
Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 289
Washington, USA.

12 posted 2005-09-26 01:34 AM

beautiful!

~*~I'm a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

13 posted 2005-09-26 03:35 AM

Oh, yes, indeed a most beautiful dance! Thanks!

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

14 posted 2005-09-26 05:11 AM

A mixture of human grace, hope and a positive placement of your feelings...indeed, lovely as a balerina....

But here it is, the connection of the human spirit to mother earth..a very important stanza, in my mind......reminds me of Wordsworth...

"There is this inner tune,
a blend of sounds
like songs of nightingales,
of melting icicles
of summer lawns
and falling leaves."

enjoyed
------------ice
><>

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

15 posted 2005-09-26 08:30 AM

you dance like no other, and so to, do your words, giving the reader warmth and joy...lovely read.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

16 posted 2005-09-26 12:08 PM

You are all so kind and your comments "dance" within my heart and give me joy.

Enjoy your freedom ... and let your heart be the guide!

Love and light.
Margherita

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

17 posted 2005-09-27 07:15 PM

A beautiful dance of words!

Love,
Eric

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

18 posted 2005-09-28 06:14 PM

All I need is some lace
and wings of butterfly''''
beautiful image....

~~**~~
There are moments when speech
is but a mouth pressed lightly and
humbly against the angel's hands
~~**~~

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

19 posted 2005-09-29 11:55 AM

Now the image and words had me wrapped around your finger Margherita! I love the ballet, and you captured the sensation that runs through a lover of ballet's soul to a "T."

To see real beauty - look with your heart.
~ Carpe diem ~

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

20 posted 2005-09-29 01:23 PM

With you on this one

Bodger

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

21 posted 2005-09-29 01:56 PM

Margherita~
My happy-tappy feet LOVE this one~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~<))><

[email protected]

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

22 posted 2005-09-30 11:39 AM

Thank you my poet friends! Your comments bring warmth to my heart.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

23 posted 2005-11-06 08:05 PM

(does happy freedom dance) Awwwwwwww, your poetic heart always gleams with grace and butterfly nectar, sweet friend, are you sure you're not half-butterfly? (giggles) The imagery is soooooo pretty in this, yay, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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