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Swan and Stream
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Swan and Stream |
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Essorant Member Elite
since 2002-08-10
Posts 4769Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada |
Swan and Stream Under day's swan Night's sleepy stream Onglides like ghost To dearest dream. The lighty swan Landing is led Newly to dawn Of stirrings' bed. In shadows deep With bending light Slides into sleep Flies into flight. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very elegant write. Enjoyed! Love, Margherita |
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Essorant Member Elite
since 2002-08-10
Posts 4769Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada |
Thanks Margherita |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Nice dream like imagery..thank you.. Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
me like |
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Essorant Member Elite
since 2002-08-10
Posts 4769Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada |
Goldenrose & Sharksbean Thank you both for looking at my poem. I'm glad you enjoyed. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Your poem plays in my mind like a slow moving water color. Enjoyed! |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Martie said it perfectly!! Much enjoyed. Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Wow...that was elegant. Ah...to be able to write a poem with rhyme... I'm still trying to figure out how to do that...it never was my best form!! HaHa!! Beautiful write! Yv~Seeing eternal Sunshine |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Loved your poem and Martie's response to it!  EA |
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