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Open Poetry #36

Sin

xFromtheHeartx
Member

since 2005-09-24

Posts 80
Florida U.S.

0 posted 2005-09-24 09:05 PM

Sin

In the darkness of shadows
My heart has become shallow
Thinking what could have been
If i had not comitted that sin
Never again
Will i be able to see him

As i walk through the halls
I see the eyes never fall
Far from me
Why does it have to be
That i have these thoughts
Of guilt and dispair
This isnt fair

The time i have to do
Will not be carried through
For the ultimite price will be paid
Cause im not affraid
To say this is my end
I will soon be with my friend

In the darkest of shadows
I've been feeling so shallow
Thoughts of what could have been
If it wasnt for that sin
That gave him his end
My friend
I shall see you again

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

1 posted 2005-09-24 09:09 PM

Welcome Hatchling LOL : To Passion In Poetry!!! This was a good First Post.. Look Forward to Reading more.. Thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

2 posted 2005-09-24 09:41 PM

Welcome to Passion's ....
     hope this is one of at least 7 exceptional writes!!

    Look forward to more!

   CT

A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05

Sharksbean
Member

since 2005-09-25

Posts 368
jax

3 posted 2005-09-26 10:09 AM

even in the deepest darkness there is light and that light is hope

Kevin1999
Junior Member

since 2005-05-10

Posts 14
WV

4 posted 2005-09-26 10:28 AM

Nice write. Welcome to Passions.

sweetpoetess
Member

since 2005-02-27

Posts 428
Florida

5 posted 2005-09-26 01:53 PM

This was really good. I could feel the sadness. Keep up the good poetry Casey!!!

Poetry is beauty in words.

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