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ice
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0 posted 2005-09-22 05:59 PM



­"A lover that in the morning rushes about to collect his kit and mutters under his breath grabbing under the mat for his socks - how I hate him."

Sei Shonagon- "The Pillow Book"
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Out, Out!-quick- their kinds normal rush
As birds awake in eves at dawn,
Breaking the comfort of cuddle.

(To him, more a huddle)

The maiden seethes-anger
Brings small solice;
The cad has left without a buss,
Leaving beard hairs in the sink.
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© Copyright 2005 ford hume - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-09-22 07:10 PM



What a cad!
and just earlier,
he was
such a lad!


Martie
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2 posted 2005-09-22 07:17 PM


Loved the humor in this, Ford, and the play on words!!  
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2005-09-22 07:57 PM


Now that wasn't very nice of him was it?
Loved this one!
Hugs~Nancy

~Autumn.. the year's last, loveliest smile.~

froggy
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4 posted 2005-09-23 12:14 PM


Sounds like someone I know.
Enjoyed the read.

:-)

iliana
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5 posted 2005-09-23 12:20 PM


LOL.....What a twist in your writing, and how very much I enjoyed it, Ford!   ....jo
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