Open Poetry #36 |
Leaving Without A Buss |
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since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"A lover that in the morning rushes about to collect his kit and mutters under his breath grabbing under the mat for his socks - how I hate him." Sei Shonagon- "The Pillow Book" ******************************** Out, Out!-quick- their kinds normal rush As birds awake in eves at dawn, Breaking the comfort of cuddle. (To him, more a huddle) The maiden seethes-anger Brings small solice; The cad has left without a buss, Leaving beard hairs in the sink. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a cad! and just earlier, he was such a lad! |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Loved the humor in this, Ford, and the play on words!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Now that wasn't very nice of him was it? Loved this one! Hugs~Nancy ~Autumn.. the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Sounds like someone I know. Enjoyed the read. :-) |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
LOL.....What a twist in your writing, and how very much I enjoyed it, Ford! ....jo |
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