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I Will....Write of You
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I Will....Write of You |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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I Will ... Write of You… You, a unique individual, capable of many fine acts ~ looking beyond your own soul and taking on several tasks… I have often read your words so admiring your writing in languages I understand, and so often find, inviting…. Ofttimes you wax poetic and kind other times you speak your mind, then you gaze and glance romantic then you will veer and write semantic. How I envy your flutter-by moments as you cause slight tremors of heart in that winsome, carefree way of yours ~ indeed, a lovely and practiced art. But what causes me to stop and read along fine lines is the sincerity that you impart, and the care of it, refined… One might pen, and one may write, others wax philosophically but when one wears a heart on sleeve then I would say, please call on me Call on me to answer true call on me to write to you call on me to whisper yes and savor this written caress So you have asked I write of you… It stands above, in ink of blue... ~*~ Slightly revised from 2001 "There's a reason they call God The Creator - he sides with talent."Julia Cameron |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Positively a lovely piece of your heart.. I'm glad to be one of the first to read it and feel its warmth. I feel as if hugged by you. Haven't I told you before that you are truly a sunshine that embraces us all...? Thank you |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"looking beyond your own soul and taking on several tasks" what a beautiful tribute! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awwwww Karilea, this is just beautiful. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Karilea, your ink was pretty pink! ~ and as beautiful and lovely as a rose.  Love & Sun Light, Linda |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie "One might pen, and one may write, others wax philosophically but when one wears a heart on sleeve then I would say, please call on me" This you do, again and again! You're beautiful without/within!  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
When a writer reaches that point that her (or his, for that matter) heart flows freely, and thoughts uninhibited, I stop and listen.....your words are a beautiful river!  ....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a touching piece from the heart |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely lady you are as beautiful outside as you are within. Love you...Nancy |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa |
The meter not only flowed smoothly, but the thoughts behind the words were just as smooth and of course, very well penned. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
quote: what a lovely call-to-arms  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
this is so lovely - and kind - and beautiful - and your soul shines -  Susan |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
inspirations are SOUL DEEP ... * S |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I love this poem. Very nicely done. Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Anyone who is fortunate enough to have your pen bleed its ink for them is wealthy beyond measure Ruth |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
What heart of tender flesh might be held in tremor...as butterflies flit and fly and a sigh gently touches a lip so tenderly sweet. Beautiful KJ...by far one of your best. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
What a gem this gorgeous piece is. I'm so glad I read it. KJ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
It is all that...and more. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Any poet would be honored to think this might be for them... Beautiful write! *S* |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Exquisite... believe in what your heart feels... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You don't just hit the bull's eye -- your arrow cuts it out and pushes it through the hay bales behind the target......Nice shootin! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Magnificent Sunshinygirl bigsmiles  Mxx take bread away from me, if you wish, take air away. but do not take from me your laughter. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A fine piece of writing...James |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
you do it good lady |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Sunshine, what an wonderful poem and honor for all the great writers you speak of. Well done. SG |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
One might pen, and one may write, others wax philosophically but when one wears a heart on sleeve then I would say, please call on me this is one small example of the generous soul you are.... beautifully thought and written... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Just looking back, thinking, remembering.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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