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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-09-21 08:06 AM


To See

To see a scene of forty green
And even green that’s in-between
Is a miracle of miracle?
The melting of a mind equivocal

It shines upon a path of go
A path of dreams of needles sew
A shroud that shades the heat of fire
The forty winks of minds attire

It is to touch upon the ground
A non exist to turn around
A hale and hearty sort of cry
A hale and hearty sort of sigh

A magic carpet sort of ride
In and out a forest pride
A walk upon a rainbows road
A kiss that turns a prince from toad

I love the fantasy of preen
Within the forty shades of green


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-09-21 08:16 AM



And you know I love
all things green...

I'd say you wrote this for me...
but then I know better...

so I'll just enjoy the view,
and the smile that comes
from only you!

Rick
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2 posted 2005-09-21 08:18 AM


I saw it all with you Seymour, another great write which was enjoyed, thank you.

Sincerely
Rick

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3 posted 2005-09-21 08:50 AM


"A magic carpet sort of ride
In and out a forest pride
A walk upon a rainbows road
A kiss that turns a prince from toad

I love the fantasy of preen
Within the forty shades of green"

Poetry doesn't get much more beautiful than this Sy!
A wonderful piece to awaken my senses this sunny September morn.
~Hugs & Smiles...and a little green tea, Nancy~

~Autumn.. the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2005-09-21 09:25 AM


Sunshine
Without you there wouldn't be a green.


Rick,
Thank you, my friend.

Nancy,
A bit of green tea would hit the spot.

Margherita
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5 posted 2005-09-21 09:31 AM


quote:
A magic carpet sort of ride
In and out a forest pride
A walk upon a rainbows road
A kiss that turns a prince from toad




How absolutely beautiful, dear Seymour!

To be able to see, like you do, is a precious gift!

Love,
Margherita

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6 posted 2005-09-21 09:55 AM


Seymour, you're amazing!!
Thankyou for blessing us each and every morning. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2005-09-21 10:17 AM


Margherita
You are my precious gift.

Chris,
Thank you dear.

LeeJ
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8 posted 2005-09-21 11:33 AM


thanks for that magic carpet...enjoyed this very much
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2005-09-21 11:35 AM


LeeJ
Thank you sweety.

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10 posted 2005-09-21 01:50 PM


Sheesh I saw a golf course!  LOL, must be wishful thinking!  Hang on tight down there you guys won't you
Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2005-09-21 02:34 PM


Sharon,
Different sights for different lights.
Thank you sweety.

Angelheart
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12 posted 2005-09-21 04:57 PM


that was a good one. thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

iliana
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13 posted 2005-09-21 05:04 PM


Now this is comforting thought!   ....jo
Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2005-09-21 05:36 PM


Thank you Angelheart

iliana,
Thank you and hugs back.

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