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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-09-21 07:49 AM

I thought of you there
when I waited by santa claus
for the sea skins to dance their eve

how you would tell me of water
and feasting on the temptations
that spread their bounty on the sand

you were behind me in the night
writing your chanting on my back book
some other woman wore your eyes

but the pen of your touch was virgin
even though you made words again
like you did in the dreams

and those my soul knew so very well

_______________

dark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (09-21-2005 09:35 AM).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-09-21 08:05 AM

I know that lane...
and Santa Claus...

Oh, this brought a smile...

Thank you.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2005-09-21 09:05 AM

indeed a smile maker this touch from your pen this morning D. Hugs big guy.

live for today,
dream of the future,
and learn eternal truths from the past..

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2005-09-21 09:15 AM

always love how you say what you say.....

Morning Dark....

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2005-09-21 09:37 AM

ms sunn..yes just a bit away from carpenteria..was warm last night..almost warm...thanks lady friend.

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gentle one, bless you soft whisper..some california shimmer for you, thanks

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lady lauren, come play in the sand with me sometime..dare you ms...thank you

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2005-09-21 09:58 AM

quote:
you were behind me in the night
writing your chanting on my back book
some other woman wore your eyes

When she is there, even if she is not. You described this so masterfully.

Love,
Margherita

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2005-09-21 02:02 PM

DS

Santa Clause slips so quickly by, driving along and it's there, then gone. This must be a different one without the little train?

You are young at heart, my friend!

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

7 posted 2005-09-21 04:14 PM

Smiling atchoo

m xx

~i want for myself your trembling~

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

8 posted 2005-09-21 04:26 PM

this was very wonderfully written ... thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

9 posted 2005-09-24 05:05 AM

this struck me breathless...

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

10 posted 2005-09-24 11:42 PM

Did indeed bring a smile and a sigh.

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