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Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2005-09-20 11:02 AM

October      will soon arrive
bringing with her   gold swells
of sunsets tapping windows ---
haunting the trails of darkness

So:

he blew the petals softly
with character and beauty

as he often does

I wanted to disappear into his breath
between his lips--just that moment
of remembering when the heart was not
wrapped in layer after layer

beautiful thought:

I want so bad to forgive his hands--
       to keep the rain from falling through
brilliant and hollow palms

often wondering if there

will  ever be a time
            when light becomes my name
- when I notice the stars as the fingers of my soul

Tonight:

you say you understand
you're looking for something to hold

between
        now
and
        sunrise

maybe autumn will feel softer this year

between
       prayer
and
       answer

because within us

there is love

~~**~~
There are moments when speech
is but a mouth pressed lightly and
humbly against the angel's hands
~~**~~

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (09-20-2005 11:33 PM).]

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2005-09-20 11:07 AM

Greeneyes
Lovely to read.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-09-20 11:39 AM

your words are as beautiful as your eyes...stunning read!

sweetpoetess
Member

since 2005-02-27

Posts 428
Florida

3 posted 2005-09-20 11:42 AM

This was very romantic. I loved it.

Poetry is beauty in words.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2005-09-20 12:42 PM

Yes, there is love ... I can feel it. Your poem is like a caress to the soul.

Beautiful!

Love,
Margherita

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

5 posted 2005-09-20 12:53 PM

"Brilliant and hollow palms"

how very cool is that?

You always write sensual, wistful romantic words and no one can touch your talent at it.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

6 posted 2005-09-20 02:03 PM

I picture the time from night to sunrise as being the time of Love .....

        and that love being enough to warm the hearts and
         prolong the Autumn's colours of such loving souls ....

                 hollow hands can hold the world!

      luv's

      CT

A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2005-09-20 03:24 PM

damn gal, it made me shiver...
and sigh...

huggin you tight

sis....

live for today,
dream of the future,
and learn eternal truths from the past..

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

8 posted 2005-09-20 04:27 PM

'maybe autumn will feel softer this year

between
prayer
and
answer

because within us

there is love'

Simply lovely Lauren

Mxx

~i want for myself your trembling~

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

9 posted 2005-09-20 05:02 PM

very nicely written

thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

10 posted 2005-09-21 12:12 PM

he blew the petals softly
with character and beauty

YOU HAVE BEAUTIFUL WORDS, which means a beautiful heart! This was truely a true love read!
Lucky Guy!

AL

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

11 posted 2005-09-21 12:26 PM

Lauren, I absolutely LOVE it.
With love and hugs,
Ethel

(thanks so much for the beautiful card, my friend)

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

12 posted 2005-09-23 07:10 PM

thank you all for stopping by...

hugssss

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