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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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While While sitting on a fence one day Watching wind and leaf in play I spied an apple pie in cool That went from eyes to taste to drool And in my mind I said a sigh I would a piece this apple pie But must get down upon the ground To close the distance of surround But on the ground my feet would touch The grime of time and such and such To step within the bog of press And make me sink into distress And there the hesitation re: A thing to be or not to be And I was at a quandaries stay Bite the apple or not this day But I was saved this coup of core The pie had disappeared indoor |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
He who hesitates is lost. Next time hustle over there Sy. Much enjoyed. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Seymour, you have just stirred in me the wish to make an apple pie today ... Thank you for the smiles and the always present hint of wisdom! ... I hope you get to taste the sweetness of the day ... today and always! Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You are no Simple SYmon, Seymour.. You knew it would be rude to try to take that pie.  But had you managed to grab that pie we could have had it with our tea. Loved your morning write You make me smile!  ~Hugs & Smiles & tea, Nancy~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ I LOVE IT !!! *Huglets* to you this fine morn~ ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
A sweet and yummy write today dear Seymour. Can almost smell that apple pie!! hugs, Chris |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
to succulent this inner core of things...dresses us up differently when we touch the ground...but you, Sy, know, for certain, from whence the goodies come.... Huggles |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio You can't win them all. Margherita Love and hugs back. Nancy, Love your humor,  Marge, Love you. Chris, You are as sweet as apple pie. LeeJ I'll have a piece of that apple pie. LOL |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"And there the hesitation re: A thing to be or not to be And I was at a quandaries stay Bite the apple or not this day But I was saved this coup of core The pie had disappeared indoor" It's great when you can take something simple and turn it into the impetus of our beginnings. Wonderful write, Sy! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Now this one made me want a piece of apple pie or an apple turnovewr. I like those. Huggers, Ethel  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
So, the early bird really does catch the worm, or pie, or perhaps you snooze you lose? |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Great poem! Who of us has not weighed the cost of our actions to the point of indecision. Only to painfully watch a golden opportunity slip from our grasp. Be fore warned fate I'm hungry for pie today! Thanks |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana LOve your replies. Hugs Sharon, Perhaps you lose the pie or worm but you might gain a nice dream. StevenS Enjoyed your comment, thank you. |
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