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Poetic Wake
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Poetic Wake |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Poetic Wake I try my best to ride the wake Which oft gives me a belly ach? For common is a rolling wave That turns a multitude of crave Transmitting is a way of ride That stays within the white abide It takes a prisms passing thru To show the colors those are true It’s true I gather many ends And try to straighten all the bends But though I gather up much wool The bag is never really full I try my best to ride the wake To vest this poem a piece of cake But common is a lease of crave That turns a multitude of wave So stand the wake and ride the stream And you’ll make true what was a dream |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wise advice this morning Sy. Well done. believe in what your heart feels... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
It’s true I gather many ends And try to straighten all the bends But though I gather up much wool The bag is never really full so so true, don't we all... me be fine, thank you very much, how be you? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How true dear Sy! Hope your week is off to a good start. ~Smiles & Hugs...and perhaps a spot of Chai tea, Nancy~ I wait now at the lake or walking by the bay |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Transmitting is a way of ride That stays within the white abide It takes a prisms passing thru To show the colors those are true"  How well said!  ....jo |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
I think I will keep riding the wave of your dreams for they roll out just perfectly to touch the fantasy within my soul....Wonderful writing....**big hugs** |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio Thank you for the read and reply. LeeJ I be fine and thank you dear, Nancy, Tea would be nice.  Thank you iliana. Startime55. Always enjoy your comments. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: The less we crave, the less we ache ... But a poetic wake like yours, dear Seymour, makes one want to realize those certain dreams ... Beautifully expressed in your beautiful unique style, that never fails the target: to give the reader some pleasant food for thought. Love, Margherita |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Always aptly said. With rhyme.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita A very sweet reply, thank you. Susan Thank you sweety. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You get extra cake and winkies for this gem of pen...your wisdom rhymes are the cherry on top and the raspberry in me tea.     |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I see you are doing some catch up. Thank you sweet. I'll write you as soon as I have more info of the affect of the storm on our cruse. WW |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana Thank you |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Lets break out the old surfboard Sir Sy! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
StevenS Good idea, lets. LOL |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
well done for a wool-gatherer, Sy |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It’s true I gather many ends And try to straighten all the bends But though I gather up much wool The bag is never really full ~*~ That's because it's Santa's bag... and you're one of his wonderful elves! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Balladeer Thank you my friend. Sunshine, Thats me. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"So stand the wake and ride the stream And you’ll make true what was a dream" Perhaps these words are wiser and hold more truth than we can realise. Enjoyed the read - thanks. Helen |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thanks for the words kind sir always enjoy reading you My spirit will rise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES Thank you for the read and reply. |
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