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Open Poetry # 36 – story from titles
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Open Poetry # 36 – story from titles |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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A Shame The Mirror to Whisper Of Years but Compassion Of Sorts What You Show Me Through The Looking Glass when I’m Stirring The Water To Meet This Reflection of Fitting Imperfections. I Used To Carry Melancholia A Few Years Back because I’m A Bird Who Cannot Fly when Moon Smiles and When Trust Is Gone (twice). What Matters Not? The Man or Nature at the Ending of Autumn when My Comeuppance the Night Knowledge of Change? Sunday Last The Stinky Water Chant of Words, Lia Lia Lia – Bsa Bsa Bsa, not Apollo’s Song From Our Hearts On Warm September Days and this Hyper Text Markup Language - best It Goes Unwritten in the Here And Now. I’ve Asked for Tunes Of More when Sharing Intimate Desires with Mountain Spirits up North but What Can We Do when Spandex won’t Hold you, my Dragonfly? The Exodus of Mike From The North To Be like a Full Moon Thump-a-Rump and this from the Fortune Teller Attuned In Feelings when Out Of Focus. Vento Va! She’s a World Weary and Self Absorbed Dreamer or a Pagan Cloud Gazing! Dance Me, Yes…Dance Me...if you won’t Marry Me By The Lake and give me Happiness In This Life but when Sun in Shroud, A Spanking said Chief Quanah Parker if you won’t Walk With Her under September Sunsets. If You Have Ever Thought At All of Petty Party Poopers who say, “Oh, Forget of Love And Lust And Women’s Eyes” you’ll stay Fenced In Willful Protection Awaiting Love forever. On Far And Distant Knoll Midnitesun Cooks By Remote Control the Dim Bones of your 2nd Love until Golden and the Echoes of this Poetic Potpourri to Shades Of Ash while you Sleep. Is There Something On Your Mind or in Your Eyes to see only Dolphins When I’m Near You On A Stop Along The Road To Samhaim? Lotionata! No Moonlight Magic for you! Ok, My First Attempt At A Sonnet on a Stupid Computer when the Moon Rose in ’72 not a Write And Reply Of Southern Whispered or a Haiku but when Everything under a Full Moon is Raining Tears, You Won’t Forget Me! Helen / 19 September 2005 |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Honeybunch...This had too be extremely hard, using all of these titles and having them make some sort of since. Very good job. Thanks for sharing...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Excellent, Honey-B enjoyed muchly.... -----------ice ><> |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a magnificant read, brilliant with a wide ranged forehead...incredible and much to absorb, especially enjoyed.... I’ve Asked for Tunes Of More when Sharing Intimate Desires with Mountain Spirits up North but What Can We Do when Spandex won’t Hold you, my Dragonfly? The Exodus of Mike From The North To Be like a Full Moon Thump-a-Rump and this from the Fortune Teller Attuned In Feelings when Out Of Focus. Vento Va! She’s a World Weary and Self Absorbed Dreamer or a Pagan Cloud Gazing! Whoa.....I see great understanding in this... |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you Paul, ice, and LeeJ. This is fun to do when one is numb and sometimes it weaves itself into what I cannot say. Glad you enjoyed. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Helen~ MUCH  for this one !!*Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Delightful writing Helen! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Helen Amazed at this...so well done!! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very much enjoyed~~ M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Helen~This is excellent!!! I so much admire a person with a talent like this. It sure cannot be an easy project of putting all these titles together.. and having it make sense to boot! Brava and hugs~Nancy I wait now at the lake or walking by the bay |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I always love to read these stories from titles, Helen. You pay tribute to all the wonderful poets here and you shine doing it! .....jo |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
that is sooo cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I would of gotten fustrated to look through all these poems. very Impressive! Thanks for sharing.... Poetry can get you very far |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Honey, I was thrilled to make the list and these things are always lots of fun. Nicely done. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you all for reading and responding. It's actually very easy to do - just print titles and write.  Sometimes it may only make sense to me though so I'm pleased that this one makes sense to others. Thanks again!Helen |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You are so good at this! Really amazing, it has rhythm and depth! Love, Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Helen, thank you for this bunch of honey! I thoroughly enjoy reading these poems that you assemble by using the titles of poems. You do it masterfully! ~ and with wit and charm! It's amazing how you manage to put them coherently togethe and have them make sense! Totally amazing! This was brill! Good going! What a fun read! Your sense of humour shone through this piece! Bunches of hugs, Linda |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Helen, A bunch of us have done it before and always find it fun.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I would never attempt but do so love to read them!! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I love these, Honeybunch. I've tried to do a few, but ususally from my love poems. I don't think I've ever done one from the whole groups poems. Thanks for sharing this with us. I really enjoyed reading it. Hugs, Ethel  |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Honeybunch--- thanks for including me... you did a wonderful job with all of these...  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 Helen, this is such a fun read!You even made me laugh again at my own titles. this really is a cool way to link so many thoughts and people together. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
You threaded those titles into an excellntly piece , thanks I noticed a couple of mine in there. I have only ever attempted doing something like this with song titles before Hope |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
My thanks to everyone for reading and commenting. Very much appreciated. I too find it amazing how titles can fit so well into a story. |
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