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Edward Grim
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since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154
Greenville, South Carolina

0 posted 2005-12-19 05:19 PM



The Bombs

The bombs that drop above my head,
Are bombs of ache and shame.
The bombs that drop into my bed,
Are bombs of grief and pain.

As the bombs rain down,
They are surely found on a clear and distant day.
The bombs, they fall,
They fall to the ground.
Landing in my way.

The craters they make are homes for the forsaken.
And graves for those they’ve taken.
The bombs they fall onto this earth without regret.
The ones who drop them will forever be forgotten.
For they are mere shadows upon my silhouette,
This pain is not real for the bomb has swept it away.
But the bombs are gone, like the earth is gone.
And my spirit gone astray.

© Copyright 2005 Edward Grant - All Rights Reserved
OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
1 posted 2005-12-20 09:56 AM


I found your thoughts very interesting in this poem (as in the others I have read), but didn't expect the last line (or perhaps the last 2).

- Owl

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