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Open Poetry #36
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
0 posted 2005-09-18 11:19 AM


A full moon rose
Without thorns
In an inevitably cool
September sky

For all the dead
Years their days’ loves
Lay still in their graves

And no ghost crossed
To move the mind
Much less the heart
To pause or praise

It was an absence
Then at last
In which a peace
Was eventually found

So one becomes
That solitary moon

Distant detached
Without regret

So stoically silent
As to be finally beautiful
As only a stone can
© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Angelheart
Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA
1 posted 2005-09-18 01:02 PM

Very nicely done...Thanks for sharing...

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura
sweetpoetess
Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428
Florida
2 posted 2005-09-18 05:30 PM

Awesome piece of writing here.

Poetry is beauty in words.
    
Drauntz
Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
3 posted 2007-04-25 05:48 PM

beauty shall have no heart.
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