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A Spanking |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Caught by poem surprisingly Forgot it was my own! In it, I found the Golden Rule But today, forgot its tone. So now, I put to test. Where to plant the anger? When to harvest crop? If the wind carries seed away, Where would it be dropped? Caught by poem surprisingly; Stunned it was my own! Can make it honest with a wish; Should change my whiny tone! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Very good, C!! (Don't be too hard of yourself.)  .....jo |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
This poem hits home... so many times, I have these same things ...when it happens again, I will read this poem.. enjoyed -----------ice ><> |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 YES! you've caught me with this one too! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I hear ya! Excellent! Hugs~Nancy I wait now at the lake or walking by the bay |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Miscellanea~ Liking the all of this ... found just a tiny tad of me in it too~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Thank you, Everyone. Just needed a little kick in the --- to realize it. While at work, I had a few special friends do that for me yesterday. I appreciated what they did for me. Inspired to write a poem to show my appreciation. ~misce |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling at you - friends are good for just that. The kick...  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Excellent!! |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
this is good .. and no dont be hard on yourself...  thanks for sharing.....Poetry can get you very far |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Misc, the sound of these lines lingers in the reader's mind ... Very good! Love, Margherita |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
very nice read... Thanks for sharing.... Poetry can get you very far |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ya know something Miss C, yer really cute! Yes, indeed, you are!   EA |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Yeah miscee, How does that happen? I know exactly what you mean. Must be our age!  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Where to plant the anger? When to harvest crop? If the wind carries seed away, Where would it be dropped? For all the playful tone, you give us much to ponder, dear lady. *S* I like this very much... excellent write! *S* |
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DennisTheMenace Member
since 2005-09-04
Posts 240 |
Like the poem, not sure how the title fits |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
So glad you all stopped by- and to answer D. the Menace's question, it refers back to my poem, Golden " " " " " " " " " " " " You know... the Golden Rule, twelve inches makes a rule_... There, I was a'preaching and kinda forgot about it myself. Thanks again. miscellanea |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
And the reminder isn't for you. Well, okay, it's for me.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Larry, For you? Hm... Guess we all need a spanking now and then! Take care. miscellanea |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
well done - guess we all need someof that once and a while - Paul |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Paul? You're back! Sooooo good to hear from you again. I hope all is well. Thanks for dropping me a line. Hoping to find something you've written... Take care, miscellanea |
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