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Open Poetry #36

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Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2005-09-16 09:12 PM

The sun sets to the east today,
It leaves fire and distruction
As a mad crowd goes
to the frankenstien castle.
Maybe he is the one
which causes thier nightmares.

Frankenstien died by fire,
But neither by the sun nor storm.
And the doctor was crippled,
Arms and legs torn limb from limb.

But still
The nightmares continued
Until no one stepped in to the light,
And their bodies tired and thirst
They sought nourishment in the next town.

-Juju

[This message has been edited by Juju (09-17-2005 03:06 PM).]

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

1 posted 2005-09-17 12:57 PM

When everything seems to be going the other way ....

         ... there is life again!

     wishing you more subtle dreams...

                     have a good night

  CT

A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05

sweetpoetess
Member

since 2005-02-27

Posts 428
Florida

2 posted 2005-09-17 01:00 AM

Very interesting poem. Enjoyed the read!

Poetry is beauty in words.

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

3 posted 2005-09-29 09:00 PM

I am glad you enjoyed my poem.

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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