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of southern whispered |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I did look at your eyes more often than I admitted but there was so much more of your shoreline to admire with tiptoe thoughts barefoot I listen to you now on my side of somewhere I hear the woman of you or is it some fanning wind pretending in her long gown to be a damp drawn dancer writhing a canvas of silk into my panted imagination ___________ dark |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Yes, I did enjoy this! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Odd how a certain look can speak so much isn't it?  Love this barefoot side of you this morning DS. Methinks you hear best when you listen to the whisper winds...  |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
what a treat~ good to read you, love~ ~babygirL **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
The vision you brought to life for me was of a woman walking along a naked shoreline while you gazed on thoughtfully...Interesting how each read brings a new life to vision...I really like this poem....**big hugs** |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
or is it some fanning wind pretending in her long gown to be a damp drawn dancer writhing a canvas of silk Awesome wording Dark. Enjoyed. Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
well, I don't think anyone out there appreciates women in the way that you do, Stranger. I really love the fact that your words seem to have eyes and fingers that trace the beautiful things. enjoyed "I want to heal, I want to feel, like I'm close to something real" |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
my imagination of you is always kind....  I do love how you say it....   luv ya my friend...~~**~~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
A beautiful poem and one which will bring tears to many. It is a tribute. |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
very good .. nice. thanks for sharing. Poetry can get you very far |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
friends with gracious eyes thank you each for the read and the reply.. I am blessed by your reviews D |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dark~ Your thoughts are treasures~ I treasure this - 'with tiptoe thoughts barefoot I listen to you now on my side of somewhere I hear the woman of you'  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
She does have a sound of her own... and sometimes, only the shoreline will feel her ache... and try to hold on to her tides... You, Sir...are magic. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
D, always you bring memory smiles~~ M |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
into my panted imagination sometimes the illusion is best ain't it? |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is when everything shapes into her and everything speaks to you of her. Very attractive write! Love, Margherita |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
just wanted to listen again.. and hear the whispers. Morning hugs babe. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"I did look at your eyes more often than I admitted" Sometimes so much is lost because someone didn't admit how much they looked.. always enjoy reading you."too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
you are good My spirit will rise |
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Obsidian Snow Member
since 2005-08-24
Posts 88 |
You write woman with such an expert hand. Bravo sir. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I hear the woman of you or is it some fanning wind Sometimes, it's hard to tell. *S* But whatever you're hearing, you write the whisper beautifully... This touches the heart. *S* |
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