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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
She didn’t give a damn nor care that was her training for before potty like Taylor’s mechanical works she was used exercised conditioned and kept asking for air and what would air have done for her She was first out but first of twins must be a boy and so she was second in the world and a man has to earn a living a woman has to earn a man and the money diverted to what was considered “right” |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
You got that right bodger... Thanks for sharing  Poetry can get you very far |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
wow My spirit will rise |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
This is an old one and unlike a lot of mine true Thanks Bodger |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
An old one? There was something here, that begged the question..."how did you know?" Could have been the Mona Lisa for this insight...but a woman paints green softer I think. Really liked this one. TD |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
TD I dont feel I am old but maybe some do. The thoughts were old if maybe it took me a while to write it. regards Bodger |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Very intriguing write. I can't help but feel sorry for this woman.  ....jo |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Yes but it is in a way history and life have a way of righting themselves and maybe the last one I wrote encaptures what was also true but maybe 60 years ago Bodger |
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