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Open Poetry #36

three shorties

lucky
Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

0 posted 2005-09-15 09:14 AM

woodland flowers
gathered for moonlit admire
the zephyr sleeps

fall inspiration
drawn from motif of whim
autumn leaves

reminisce sings
among the ocean tides
memoir pours forth

Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again...
~Rosemary J. Gwaltney~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2005-09-15 09:17 AM

Beautiful...simply beautiful images.
Well done.
Hugs~Nancy

I wait now at the lake or walking by the bay
I wait and listen or put a seashell
to my ear and it all comes back
the wind's soft murmur..and you.

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

2 posted 2005-09-15 09:27 AM

I like the pleasant feel of this,
your senses well worded.
Especially "woodland flowers
gathered for moonlit admire".
Harvest moon coming up, at that...

K

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

3 posted 2005-09-15 10:19 AM

Let it pour, let it pour.....

It's good to see you, mon!

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Obsidian Snow
Member

since 2005-08-24

Posts 88

4 posted 2005-09-15 11:01 AM

like a gentle breeze of warm words.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2005-09-15 11:16 AM

Hi Dale....so happy to see your lovely poetic art here today!! Hug Rosemary for me!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2005-09-15 11:47 AM

Lucky~
Well ... make that lucky ME ... to peek in and find YOU here with another write of beauty is like finding the garden in worded bloom~

My love to you and Rosemary~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email [email protected]

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

7 posted 2005-09-15 11:50 AM

Each one weaves its own vision...Absolutely stunning...**big hugs**

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