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Dr.Moose1
Member Elite

since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

0 posted 2005-09-13 10:16 PM

Interred within the drifting clouds
a spirit seeking passge, dare,
through sighs, become a gentle breeze
dispersed upon an evening fair.

At times, to make its' presence known,
an aberration of the light,
a shift in ones perspection sensed
acknowledging the spirits' flight.

That dabbles not in mans' affairs,
preferring to infuse the sky,
in parting leaving complex winks
of stars, to mark our passing by.

Until such time, as dawn appears
and daylight casts its' vivid shroud,
communion with this spirit seems
more so condoned, than just allowed.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2005-09-13 10:20 PM

"That dabbles not in mans' affairs,
preferring to infuse the sky,
in parting leaving complex winks
of stars, to mark our passing by."

Awesome write, Dr.Moose! I'll think about this the next time I feel a gentle breeze, too. It's a piece that will stick with me.

......jo

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2005-09-13 10:31 PM

That dabbles not in mans' affairs,
preferring to infuse the sky,
in parting leaving complex winks
of stars, to mark our passing by.

Library bound this treasure is!
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

3 posted 2005-09-13 10:34 PM

that was good.. thanks for sharing..with this nice popcorn here...umm so tasty good...lol I really did like this tho thanks

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

4 posted 2005-09-13 10:38 PM

This was very well done--I'll have to come back for a closer read....

~sky

They way you live your life is up to you, but dying is NOT an option!!

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

5 posted 2005-09-14 06:15 AM

"At times, to make its' presence known,
an aberration of the light,
a shift in ones perspection sensed
acknowledging the spirits' flight."

Absolutely right but only for the believers. An excellent piece that I think tells it like it is but then again, I'm a believer.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2005-09-14 09:28 PM

So beautiful, Doc!!!

Dr.Moose1
Member Elite

since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

7 posted 2005-09-22 10:01 PM

For all who replied. thank you.

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