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Open Poetry #36

choosing not to love

Xeonox

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0 posted 2005-07-02 02:07 AM

Who knew love would come so swift?
Not on angel, but devilish wings,
It held them tight, full of passion,
And unexplored desires,

They cared for each other greatly,
Their eyes held not a twinkle of remorse,
And for each other they gave up their love,
So that the others around them can live on,

Keeping this love a secret,
He cried many nights,
And she left him knowing she left her heart,

Darkness has made itself welcomed,
Were only pearly whites had been,
One heart now became two,
And two will become four as they move forward,

Reminiscing about the love they shared,
They are left to wonder if the choice was right,
And then there is silence…

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-07-02 03:32 AM

loved the ending

good write

passing shadows
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2 posted 2005-07-04 07:10 AM

MARK V SHELDON
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3 posted 2005-07-04 09:50 AM

I know this moment well. Nice capture.

-MVS

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Xeonox

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4 posted 2005-07-04 01:29 PM

Thanks for your response.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

Sharksbean
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5 posted 2005-10-04 05:49 PM

this was sad. thanks for sharing this.

-may the force be with you in poetry

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2005-10-04 07:51 PM

"And then there is silence."....nice...James

iliana
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7 posted 2005-10-04 09:24 PM

A difficult choice, it seems. Enjoyed the write, Xeonox.

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