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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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They say I absorb too much, sensitivity a negative for me. Clinging sadness, for the you whom suffer needlessly. I worry when awake and sleep to tunes of more. Wondering, always wondering the "whys and where ofs for". My life is on the edge. It teeter/totters so. But I am here, and always there absorbing on the go. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
My life is on the edge. It teeter/totters so. You said it M! Nice to see you here today.  |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
I like the inward sense of taking the fun out of yourself And English trait Bodger |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I wouldn't want it any other way... I absorb and it reminds me of humility and compassion.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
This is good.. nice beginning, with a wonderful ending.. Thanks for sharing..... Poetry can get you very far |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
.... HMMMM .. SOUNDS LIKE A SPONGE! ... but you have to get a squeeze now and then to make room for more!!! CT A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05 |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
It's so good to see you here. I hope you are okay. I have missed you. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
And the best part is we can always count on you. M, then I get to worry less, right? If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I'm like you Maureen.. take too much in and worry far too much then we become a couple of crohnies.  hugs and luv, Nancy I wait now at the lake or walking by the bay |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Life on the move, always going, Up and down and all around Your helpfulness always showing Gloom |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
They say I absorb too much, sensitivity a negative for me. We are so very much a like~ Maureen |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
life does that at times i cant taste the poison that im drinking your death is in disguise |
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CalicoMemories Junior Member
since 2004-08-31
Posts 15the wind in the trees |
It is always good to absorb life. A fine read cm I am one person. I am a chorus of a thousand souls. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
That's why we have different layers of skin, M. Absorbtion is good, my friend, but must not be allowed to permeate too deeply...otherwise it becomes self-destructive. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
So well said, Maureen!  ....jo |
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