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Open Poetry #36
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sweetpoetess
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since 2005-02-27
Posts 428
Florida
0 posted 2005-09-10 01:39 PM

I know the pain you feel
I know the lonliness
Of being alone
But I'll try to fix you

Right now you do not know
All the pleasures you have
With no man around
But I'll try to fix you

You do not know
What all you can do
All the places you can go
But I'll try to fix you

You have no clue
Of all the freedom
You have
But I'll try to fix you

I can tell you
From expeirence
No man is needed
Until the right one
Comes along

But until you understand
That one true
Piece of advise
I'll try to fix you

Poetry is beauty in words.
    
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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2005-09-10 02:02 PM

yeah, but it's sure nice to have them around until the right one comes

good write Julie
Angelheart
Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA
2 posted 2005-09-10 03:26 PM

miss. Julie,
   That is a wonderful poem!!!  Thanks for sharing
icebox
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383
in the shadows
3 posted 2005-10-02 08:55 AM

Nice write with worthwhile thoughts but I think the human soul is only self repairing.
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