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Open Poetry #36

Rainbow

PazSqual
Member

since 2003-11-17

Posts 71

0 posted 2005-09-08 09:28 PM

Rainbow

I see a
Rainbow on the horizon
But am afraid to reach out to it
I still feel the effects of past storms
And am afraid to reach out to this ray of light
Afraid to let it touch me
Afraid:
as soon as it touches me, it will be turned off

[This message has been edited by PazSqual (09-09-2005 12:28 PM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-09-08 10:41 PM

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

2 posted 2005-09-08 11:17 PM

This is nice but sounds too sad...
Never be afraid to reach out. Life is too short to be hesitant about the future.
bring out your best smile and force a new attitude and run for it...
best to you, martyjo

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2005-09-09 07:28 AM

So good to read you again.

Thought long about this write.
Light is resilient and reflective, just as the stars and the moon. In those terms, the cosmic rainbow never ceases.

Nice write.
TD

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

4 posted 2005-09-14 02:58 PM

latearrival is right on that "life is too short".. this was sad but well worded.. Thanks for sharing and and may Godbless you!!

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2005-10-15 11:32 PM

Been a while.
Good to read you again.
TD

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