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shades of paul
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In Reality

0 posted 2005-12-19 08:50 AM



Invalidated ruler of second command,
who has soiled the bird never to fly again.
You who fan the flame of evil,
your oily cake frosting makes me vomit.
The Master of torturous ways,that leave skeletons of dead
in your cabinet.
Vessels of contamination flow from your serpent lips,always hidden in an undisclosed location.
The dragon's tail exits excretions of green,
always indifferent to needs of the common. paul,


shades of paul,peace,love,and happiness


[This message has been edited by shades of paul (12-21-2005 07:35 AM).]

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Midnitesun
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1 posted 2005-12-19 04:13 PM


I don't understand this one. Who is this about? Is it an imaginary character or someone real?

wandering glider
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2 posted 2005-12-19 08:24 PM


shades . . .

The spelling in the title piqued my curiosity.  Clever.
Yes, I know who and what this is about.  All too real and dangerous.  
And yet I find you are being kind.
Well done, I could not be so polite!

(Midnitesun - Think about it . . . surely you know who is being described here!)

~glider~

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Gaia
3 posted 2005-12-19 08:32 PM


lol, thanks glider for the nudge
I had figured it out anyway, and yes
'tis a jolly good write, enjoyed muchly


no fly zones extended over his home,
for this and the rummy

so not even SANTA can get near him


shades of paul
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4 posted 2005-12-23 09:24 AM


Thank you for your comments....paul..Gods peace to you !

shades of paul,peace,love,and happiness

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