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September Sunsets |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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~*~ Moving closer to shore as the tide recedes basking in a foreign tranquility what must be the wind on my back moving between seasons memories of September sunsets run off the blue sky. I no longer listen for a siren song not meant for me a lark in the breeze skimming the sea and all that glitters like timeless fantasies. Lifted by wings and a quiet calling that buoy my heart and some kind of love broken to pieces weary of drifting aimlessly. ~*~ |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
my wayward sun shines glittering those sunsets ... beautifully great to see and hear from you CT A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05 |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Such regal grace in the depths of your words Bluesy. TD |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"Lifted by wings and a quiet calling that buoy my heart and some kind of love" Beautiful! As is your new photo of the summertime you.  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you so much Craig, Kathleen and Martie for being here. I've missed you~ |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Good to see you posting, Bluesy.....:-) A lovely poem, warm as September can be.....even with the chill of an angst breeze in it...It is still beautiful... enjoyed ------------ice ><> |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
memories of September sunsets run off the blue sky. ~*~ Lori! I've missed you. Write me. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
There you are! Gosh, Lori, I have missed you and your poetry. This was a lovely poem! You haven't lost your touch, Dear Bluesy One! "Lifted by wings and a quiet calling that buoy my heart" ~ How beautiful! I am happy for you! ...and btw, you are looking absolutely fabulous!!!! Hugs with love, Linda |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Lifted by wings and a quiet calling that buoy my heart and some kind of love broken to pieces weary of drifting aimlessly *************************** wisdom and grace in these words drifting with or without destination you still fly my yellowbird so nice to hear you sing again  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Blues That is a lovely serenade from a lovely Sernade.  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
It's great to read you again, Bluesy gal! You look as good as a "September sunset" - one of ours that is because we are now just into Spring. If you didn't read my response to you on one of my poems, I was indeed just thinking of you before you posted. Also e-mailed you but probably to an address no longer current. Hope to read you again soon. Take care! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BluesSerenade~ Good to see you back ... enjoyed the thoughts that traipsed through this one~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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DennisTheMenace Member
since 2005-09-04
Posts 240 |
Nice, like the pic too, Round here it’s June Sunrises, but I’d share a sunset with you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
weary of drifting aimlessly I know that feeling and Bluesy? you're not one to ever give up... you've been missed |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"Moving closer to shore as the tide recedes basking in a foreign tranquility what must be the wind on my back moving between seasons memories of September sunsets run off the blue sky." Like a water color word painting. Soothing Bluesy...  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Soft and lovely Bluesyone. Much enjoyed. Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"I no longer listen for a siren song not meant for me a lark in the breeze skimming the sea and all that glitters like timeless fantasies" when you stop by you certainly do it right! Very soothing words..a commitment to what is.. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
very beautiful piece of poetry...thanks for sharing Poetry can get you very far |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Almost missed this beauty~~ Love and Miss You M |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
The blues at its best! How 'ya doin', Bluesy. It's good to see you here today. ......jo |
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SoundWaves Member
since 2005-06-22
Posts 113Center Stage |
Great read! The spotlight can only get brighter. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Lifted by wings and a quiet calling that buoy my heart and some kind of love broken to pieces weary of drifting aimlessly. ~~~  missed you.... ~~**~~ |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Ah well...by the time I get here all the good words are taken. However, the timeless story of sand, sea, sky and a lone human can't ever be told too often. And you do it so well. It is always nice to read your work. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lori, your words always move me and make me FEEL. I have missed you dear, write me soon. HUGS live for today, |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
This poem is wonderful..all of it strikes me. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
And still you touch my heart and keep me reaching out. It's not fun to miss you. But it is always a delight to know you're there. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I am so appreciative to all of you. Oh, I could write a book, but I'll save it. Thank you for always accepting me and my bluesy ways, but more importantly for the little things that mean so much to me. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
THERE IS A SPARK OF LIGHT FROM THE WEST TONIGHT ... ... a star no doubt, a wonderous sight for even with eyes closed one could read her every write .... *S CT A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05 |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lori, it is so good to read you, my friend. I miss you. Huggers, Ethel  |
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