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Betrayal.
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Betrayal. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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This morning I dreamt of your face as we lay back to back, I, his. And as he stirred turning to face me I didn't want to live all over again in this dreamlike quality of life I would rather sleep and live with you, and the whisper of raven locks covering your eyes. Damned ladies of Orpheus |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is highly loaded with psychological significance. It's a great write about human nature. Love, Margherita |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
So many times I have felt we were living the same life.. I wonder if we are. You write so much of what I wish I could.. Into my library. Will ever the morning |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
talk about letting truth fly free you amaze me, gemma gal, and always will with your candid snapshots |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
lost dreams... we betray ourselves more often than not with belief.  you always leave me something to think about. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
intensely deep writing Gemma. I enjoy your poetry very much. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
you use words sparingly and well Enjoyed Gloom |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very poignant. Eric |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this gave me a very sad an empty feeling footnote: your health deserves the best that medical attention can buy, in other words, you go to the best doctors, and not local yocals... and indeed, so does your quality of life, deserve happiness... Magnificant write...sort of surreal... |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa |
Felt it. enjoyed it. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
sometimes you melt me with words, im fat so it smells kinda like bacon, which is also good..mmmmm bacon |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
sometimes our dreams are worth living .... some forever would. your thoughtd always seem alive! CT A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05 |
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