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Hunting. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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Deep within me, I am hunting, search and destroy. Time has an unbearable hold upon me, this has to be a dream..for the words melt across the page untill they are illegible. There is something about you that I did not notice before, something greater than I am.. and you are this creature, much different than the rest, incredibly strong yet without conviction, you leave me bound in confusion.. Come to me envelope me in warmth and leave me cold leave me I have lost a blossom of hope, burning my bridges behind me, you.. are my reflection, deeply defiant and content in rage.. Tell me, how is it that you are both pure and empty? Both nonexistent and perfect. leave me let me be crucified alone. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 gawd Meg...this aches so much |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
feeling the torment in this coming across the screen good to see you posting again  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: This is powerfully expressed and it hurts. Very well rendered inner torment. Love, Margherita |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
For one of the very few times in my life, I am speechless... http://www.mysticwicks.com |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
this has to be a dream..for the words melt across the page untill they are illegible You describe perfectly, those nauseating times where you are awake and walking around in confusion, but it feels like everything else is moving, because you feel like you must be either dead, or asleep. Where words blur and become sealike. Ugh. And I love the strong opening lines, which made me imagine you in a computer game, playing against yourself. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
deep stuff.. hugs, g |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
In your hunting, you bring out the deepest part!  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Tell me, how is it that you are both pure and empty? Both nonexistent and perfect. wonderful writing..very meaningful to me M |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
This poem....should be required reading. No ifs, no ands, no buts. Required. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
following the pitter patter of Ed's thoughts ... ... and firmly placed them within the required lines of my scope. you ache deeply  CT |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh, this aches.. m xx ~i want for myself your trembling~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, my... I'm speechless... Both the power and the pain are stunning... Excellent write! |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
good luck in the hunt  and then He created the horse... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This just aches of yearning, and a need of validation. Meg, the self-discovery holds the key to all our happiness that is for damn sure. |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Kaoru you are a complicated, sophisticated and strong little lady...with claws. Alway's delightfully so. |
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