Enveloped lost unthinking words lost

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Open Poetry #36

Enveloped lost unthinking words lost

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-08-26 08:02 PM

People hear songs with are nothing more than short words with a short rhyme usually stolen

I rebelled against what was a lack of thinking on writing tabular words to get to the short to condense the essence

To a degree I was wrong

Short loses something that we are now all seeking

Enveloped lost unthinking words lost

As a short poem for the long

that delivered short

And the poem was in here

Bodger

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2005-08-26 10:39 PM

I happen to enjoy both long and short poems, and it often depends upon the quality of the imagery, the development of a metaphor, the feeling I get when I repeat certain phrases outloud...yes, the way they roll across the tongue and land in my ears. LOL, does that make sense? Sometimes, a short poem has a much greater impact on me than a rambling write that leads me down a blind alley.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2005-08-26 10:51 PM

And in this,

Bodger,

Oh, I heard the song of the Questioner...

it is an excellent call, this is!

Thank you!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-08-27 07:02 AM

I read this earlier
and I am reading it again

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