Consummate Love(Then, Now and the Beginning)

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Open Poetry #36

Consummate Love(Then, Now and the Beginning)

marcel
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

0 posted 2005-08-23 11:58 PM

Consummate Love(Then, Now and The Beginning)

It hurts to love you so much,
A burning desire that feeds my passion
Giving the sun another reason to rise;
But it seems your heart poured tears into the sea
Adding to the bitter swirl of orgasmic bliss
We both shared…though you fought the endless moments---
This unknown place of pleasure you sent me
When I closed my eyes and wished for love.

My love, my love
To sleep means to hurt!
Patience and vengeance have caught up,
Now I know what it is like to be forgotten;
Yes, cruel and hollow the sword,
We remove from the depth of our emotions
Leaving a scar that lasts forever.
I hate this feeling of sadness and glee
That makes me want to apologize for the past…
I am sorry
Please forgive me
To those others, I quietly forgive
Tossing rocks into the mouth of my angel
In exchange for his blissful wings
To which I soar into forgetfulness…

It hurts to kiss your skin
You taste of the sweetest scent
A maddening perfume of the perfect woman
Makes me want to consume every part of you
So sweet
So passionate
So cruel
So unreal
Bit by bit I consume you
Though it hurts so much
Hurts so much, it hurts…
To love you as I do
My stomach aches and turns in content
Devouring slowly what should be…
I will always remember your piteous smile
And your reflection in the lakes gentle calm,
But your memory will soon fade as the setting sun
Until there is nothing left but your love.

Marcel

[This message has been edited by marcel (08-24-2005 12:47 AM).]

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2005-08-26 03:40 AM

I felt this one, it's lovely.. Thank you.

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2005-08-27 01:12 AM

Marcel, this brought tears to my eyes. It really says it all.

....jo

poe
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since 2004-09-06

Posts 180
Heading to China

3 posted 2005-08-27 03:13 AM

How true this is.
Love does consume, creating one beautiful being.
Thank You for this piece.

Tomorrow comes for those who fear it.
Today never ends for those who live it.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-08-27 07:22 AM

very nicely described

this feeling

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