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Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2005-08-26 04:44 PM

Standing beneath a star blanket
counting moonbeams and dust trails
they dare me to stare, to see

~Beyond~

The gravel walkway beneath my feet,
it stumbles me every time
as it dares me to step

~Beyond~

Self-absorption steals my breath,
chokes me with my own stupidity,
holds me back from something great

~Beyond~

The glaciers melt into blue brilliance
while my whispers fade into the collective pale,
and that’s what lies ahead of me,

~Beyond~

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2005-08-26 04:46 PM

You are on a roll today Kacy!

Very wise words.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2005-08-26 04:49 PM

I'll count the moonbeams with ya....

lovin this Kacy...

P.S. I'll bring the pales...

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2005-08-26 04:50 PM

I'm with you Kacy, lets slide across the galaxies on moonbeams.

I love when you write
and post!!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2005-08-26 04:50 PM

glad to know these notes in cyberblue can touch someone in 3D reality

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2005-08-27 05:03 PM

I can't believe that your whispers will ever fade

even in the beyond

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

6 posted 2005-08-27 05:24 PM

Self-absorption steals my breath,
chokes me with my own stupidity,
holds me back from something great

I love the way this sings to me..especially those lines...like a slap to the face...do I ever know how that feels...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2005-08-27 05:42 PM

offering humble thanks, Dixie
and Ceinwyn the procrastinator? LOL, I think we all fall when we step into that self stuff

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

8 posted 2005-08-30 07:56 PM

Enjoyed,
particularly the repeating word
I'm sure it is whispered.

Gloom

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

9 posted 2005-08-30 08:04 PM

ah, Professor, it shouts at me today
thank you for taking amoment to read and reply; it means more to me today than you could possibly know

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