Open Poetry #36 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
hello laughter of the ink men’s shadows bathe my plaster walls with your songs burn my skin ends under the brims let me writhe my time in their fire and on the morrow there at the boundaries of sky and ocean behind breath of wind the gods will know my bones as driftwood that scatters it's syllables in stutterspeak from dune of day and un-tide led nights that protrude like the neon of dreams from bearded mounds on faceless hills where walked before the fast foot men from their hurry shoe frenzies to build new altars to their demons and dames the folding kind of promises that hide in behind the scenes pocket protectors only the penny man can find under his pillow ______________ dark scribnote: charactor study of tattooze and suitz dealing with the econimic opportunity of inflated gas prices... btw..the tattoozer is riding his most worthy metal steed |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
and on the morrow there at the boundaries of sky and ocean behind breath of wind the gods will know my bones as driftwood that scatters it's syllables in stutterspeak ---- Brilliant writing here. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms K' Thank you for the eyes |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and on the morrow there at the boundaries of sky and ocean behind breath of wind the gods will know my bones as driftwood that scatters it's syllables in stutterspeak so, we know the same gods, do we not...(wink) not to worry, their eyes are boared up in the rubble of their broken machines, we will procede forward when the light turns green Hugs and thank you for this! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
written deeply, this slice of life. ah....but thank the gods for metal steeds yes? fight your fights, find your grace, change the things that you can change, and get right with the man...{van zandt} |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and on the morrow there at the boundaries of sky and ocean behind breath of wind the gods will know my bones as driftwood that scatters it's syllables in stutterspeak from dune of day and un-tide led nights that protrude like the neon of dreams from bearded mounds on faceless hills where walked before the fast foot men ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Lordy I love the way your minds eye turns everything to poetry!! you are captivating. I'll bare the brunt of your long buried pain |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
and on the morrow there at the boundaries of sky and ocean behind breath of wind the gods will know my bones as driftwood that scatters it's syllables in stutterspeak ~*~ Meghan and I and it seems, the others, were pulled by the same tug... and somehow I heard the clatter of runes... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Lee J..you sooth the sky my eyes keep distant with closing, thank you lady friend. _________________ ms GS, you are a gentle spirit at the mirrors of fire dance, thanks for the touch _______________ ms JM, behind me with your hands in the deep pocket water, you smile me thank you lady _______________ ms sun..your gowns of reply bring musical perfume to my mind rooms...thank you lady friend |
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