Open Poetry #36 |
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sweetpoetess Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428Florida |
In your past You did bad things But you did good things In the presant To make up for what You had done You helped the poor, Ones without parents, The disabled, Those who were widowed, And those with no home You showed them all love, Courage, And the help to see That it was not their fault That they ended up with these problems You showed them That for once Someone really cared for them And that they Would never be forgotten Poetry is beauty in words. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Julie~ Good deeds today outweigh the bad of the past~ Nicely done~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very sweet write |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Gratitude for and respect to such people. Why are they the minority...? -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Very nice words Bodger |
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PazSqual Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 71 |
People like this are so amazing, yet so few, nice write. Thank you for sharing, Paz |
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