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Slow Fired Glaze Of Rain ( Rain 3-5)
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Slow Fired Glaze Of Rain ( Rain 3-5) |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Mosaics form from fractures Of the light that stands outside Vigilant in its duty to chase away the dark As rain drops cling to the spaces In the open mesh of screen Behind which I sit Wondering if there sits too In a vestibule another who watches As the passing front mixes with Warm moist thoughts to create wet That trickles thickly down Breaking light as it goes into Moroccan squares Reminding me of the way Spices smell on bared skin and how it is To find the comfort of colors Blushed pale when light changes And the soft brush of silk no longer Covers the curves shadowed in evening Such storms, should be enjoyed With an exposure of the soul to voids As are left in rainbows and in words that try To paint the colors upon the warmth of skin In a flush of some exhaled sigh Slow-fingered caress of wind Tracing lines as patterns form In a rhythm of movement that follows The natural hollows within There come low soft moans To echo against vacant dreams That rustles leaves in a Sway of limbs And the rumble deep within the heart That lightning’s close To the thunder that follows Shaking loose the tiles of rain Set upon the stillness of clouds Ever rolling in a rush towards the dawn Such hues are born On tip of tongue to be brushed upon The paler forms Where shadows play And lust for rain and you Is born |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ron "Where shadows play And lust for rain and you Is born" I still lust for rain, but the sky is dry. It is so good to see you here today!!  |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
It's a good day to sit on the porch and tell stories, don'tcha think??? And so good to see and read ya bud...  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Mosaics form from fractures Of the light that stands outside Vigilant in its duty to chase away the dark As rain drops cling to the spaces In the open mesh of screen Behind which I sit Wondering if there sits too In a vestibule another who watches As the passing front mixes with Warm moist thoughts to create wet That trickles thickly down Breaking light as it goes into Moroccan squares" Exactly as it should be. You have made my day complete. and believe me, another does indeed sit.  Thank you for gracing me. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Amazing - this is the way I feel about our weather here as well, but couldn't say it nearly as eloquently  I too, lust for the "smell of it" just even the promise of it, but no dice.Nice to read you today. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I can do almost everything fast, but you know that... but I can't READ you fast. I swear, Cap, I think you bring my pressure down too. mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm It's a good day. thank you for this, and well, just you. |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
**cool blue shivers** ~baby **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"With an exposure of the soul" ~your forte~ to delve beneath the skin |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your desert trips make me hungry for dates... and I don't particularly like dates.  Now,let me go pour the sand out of my slippers, so I may sit, and read again. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
damn fine bowing out for ladies choice... good to see you around again Ron |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Slow-fingered caress of wind Tracing lines as patterns form In a rhythm of movement that follows The natural hollows within There come low soft moans To echo against vacant dreams That rustles leaves in a Sway of limbs And the rumble deep within the heart That lightning’s close To the thunder that follows Capt. Ron, I have never heard the wind, thunder, and lightning described in such a sensual way before. This is so beautiful, Sir. It sure is good to read you tonight. Thank you. Hugs, Ethel |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Shaking loose the tiles of rain Set upon the stillness of clouds Ever rolling in a rush towards the dawn'''' ~~ this leaves me with the image of the powerful storm moving in....oh how I enjoy the storm through your eyes....  |
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