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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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~~**~~ Toutes les roses qui étaient une fois meurent lentement un à un je regarde de la chute de pétales frappant le sol amer comment triste ils ne remarquent pas le soleil quand l'hiver arrive ~~**~~ ~~**~~ All the roses that once were are dying slowly one by one I watch petals fall hitting bitter ground how sad they do not notice the sun when winter arrives ~~**~~ You're so vain you probably think this song is about you (CS) ~~**~~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Lauren, so creative and dramatic....I like this.  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Their time past... their seed? Future... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
beautiful though sad... M |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
how eloquent, Lauren, honestly. This reminded me of one Christmas where it was warm here (I know) and we did not get any snow until Christmas Eve and I had, in full bloom, white roses. Have a px of it someplace. Lightly dusted in the first snowfall, it was amazing. But other than that, no, they don't - nor do we. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
... fallen, in Winter's fare only to bare to the spring ... and once more should have arose where time is life ... smiling here .... beauty of an orchid! well written. ~ CT |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
iliana~ hi there and thank you....I appreciate your thoughts... ~ Karilea~ winter approaches so quickly here....not everything can survive such bitter cold.....until spring again arrives and the flower blooms.....your thoughts mean a lot to me thank you...  ~~ Hi james, thank you for stopping by....  ~~ Maureen~ yes, sad....but in its own beauty... ~~ LW~ I'd love to see the picture...how beautiful a thought of roses in snow... ~~ Craig....  how poetic a response....thank you I savor the orchid!  ~~**~~ |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Wow! So tender and wistful in its sadness. I appreicate this delicate piece. SG |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
this.. you ... so eloquent my dear friend.  yesterday is gone |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Beautiful...very.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Je ponce que vous etes un fleur extraordinaire dans l'hiver aussi!   Avec Amour, Linda |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
How beautiful, Lauren. I love roses.... and I love this poem. Hugs,  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
"And I can remember forever december The center of dying, the heart of the pain The rose in the bottle, the thorns in the bottom The stars surround me, the cold astounds me" "Forever December" Tabitha's Secret   I'll bare the brunt of your long buried pain I don't mind helping you out ... But I want you to remember my name Alanis |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Des saisons ne sont jamais dupées par le soleil.  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
This is so beautiful it deserves to be front and center with all the other brilliant poets posting today.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
hugsss and love to all....thank you |
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