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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn 
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Well, here’s a first A woman I know Has just directed me to write a poem “Write”, she says “Tell me a story” “Nothing about your muse going missing” “Just pretend you are talking, to me” “Write something about free will and obedience” “I know you have something to say about that” While its true I’ve felt compelled to write, now and again Of This, or that woman And on occasion For A specific lady But this, I believe Is the first time I’ve been enjoined To write a poem By A woman And if not, I’m sure the first to ask Would have wanted A flowery study on devotion Or, at least Some impertinent prose Concerning the use of her assets Though, I do hate to disappoint a lady I’ll need to proffer an apology For disdaining her topic To write instead On irony |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
 I will be taking bets on just who this woman would be! Irony is a favorite topic of mine. You do it justice as you do with everything you write of.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Aw, shucks! When I read your title, I thought I was in for a scintillating kiss and tell! No matter, you entertained me with your witty charm afterall! ~ How ironic!   Linda |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
wranx Well said. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
gleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee and *cackle* gawd I love the yeti! this is PERFECT. And you managed to keey yer free will as ye obey, and hold on to yer, um, DIGNITY.  some day yeti, you and I have a game of chess waiting!  |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I will bet on THAT game! LOL, Ed you are a very funny man, but you must surely know that? Assignment done! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
smiling* Well done Sir Ed... well done indeed!  |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
**oh damn, Wranx*** !!!! **baby **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you, Yeti, for the give of take. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
awwwww this is better than you splained to me, Lucy! shaking head... this is great and thank you Mistress X for challenging the yeti grin |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ed, I love that lady for challenging you!! You did good, Sir poet....very good!! Hugs, Ethel |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I came back to both apologize for rushing through this earlier, but also to inhale the layerings. *shaking me head* this is grand, and I hope you know that. I thank you, and a funny thing, I have come to expect the unexpected from you, and I was still caught offguard. Damn I love that. gleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed and you did it so well!! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
as soon as I saw this: “Write”, she says “Tell me a story” I knew she had ya *grin* |
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