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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2005-12-18 10:27 PM




you pose in feelings

come close so I can hurt you

don’t you want to play

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littlewing
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1 posted 2005-12-18 10:38 PM


playing with a heart?
She sounds scary, icey.

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2 posted 2005-12-18 11:02 PM


whew...
Martie
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3 posted 2005-12-18 11:11 PM


Icebox

This is scary!  

iliana
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4 posted 2005-12-18 11:52 PM


This brings to life the old saying, "You always hurt the ones you love."  How much truth there is to this.  Frankly, I appreciate the truth of what you've phrased (and it actually made me chuckle, although not such a happy chuckle).  No, I'm not sick....it is the dance that offers a chance to evole, perhaps, if we 'humans' have the courage to try it in the rain. ....jo
Honeybunch
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5 posted 2005-12-19 12:49 PM


I certainly have to ditto the "whew"!  People dance and they pose and it's always for some kind of twisted gain.  Sometimes they're so wrapped up in themselves that they don't even know that they're doing it but it's a scary encounter when you know that they do know.  We turn away - right?  And this either externally or internally but always we end up with a ... sore neck!
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6 posted 2005-12-19 01:02 AM


Like they say, once bitin', twice sly.....


As always with yours, many currents within...thank you for dropping this spot of dye, to help us trace them.

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Alwye
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7 posted 2005-12-19 03:06 AM


yikes...scary.  Good write.
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8 posted 2005-12-19 01:19 PM


So yer a teddy bear with teeth.

I ain't a-skeered o you.

much.

Enchantress
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9 posted 2005-12-19 01:23 PM


With those kind eyes of yours..
I'm not afraid.

~Let peace begin with me...     

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