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Open Poetry #36

The Constant Noise

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-08-22 10:02 PM

the noise the nosie
inside my head! the
dead can hear me singing
this sweet song of desperation

I just need a temporarly vacation
from your lies. I need an aliby to
get away fast

get the tracks pack my bags
later got to go up to the sunrise.

sun shine upon my face and take me
away to another day anything but
this eternal damnation.

rough draft unedited.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-08-22 10:18 PM

I think we all feel that way at one time or another

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2005-08-23 08:17 AM

Yes, life is so pretty, isn't it?
I hear that clatter in my own skull.

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2005-08-23 10:34 AM

I know there are many times I have felt this way....You put the feelings perfectly...*big hugs*

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

4 posted 2005-08-23 03:21 PM

yea life's a pain

*tears

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

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