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tatalinia
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since 2005-12-17
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0 posted 2005-12-18 08:09 PM



You love him yes your love for him is so strong
your eyes sparkle as you speak of him
you met him when we were young i remember
a crush so innocent so sweet
a match made from heaven you two are
i will be there to watch you become a unit
a team of eternity
and i fare you a good well  
and dont let anyone change you from what you
see for its a beautiful thing love when its right
dressed all in white you will look so lovely that night
we will laugh and celebrate for lifetimes are short
enjoy the best at the best of times
you will have ups and downs but never frown
for what you have many seek
and go lifetimes without finding, dying without love
after i fare you good well i shall depart
for my time has come to tell you goodbye


© Copyright 2005 Althia Kinsey - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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1 posted 2005-12-18 11:58 PM


Enjoyed...James
pictureme2
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since 2005-11-13
Posts 194

2 posted 2005-12-19 12:02 PM


Felt like you were letting me walk thru your thoughts! bitter sweet...enjoyed.
pictureme2

tatalinia
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since 2005-12-17
Posts 137
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3 posted 2005-12-19 12:14 PM


thank you , glad u liked it
littlewing
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4 posted 2005-12-19 05:05 PM


aww this is bittersweet, but much understood.


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