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SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

0 posted 2005-08-22 10:43 AM

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Dreaming at the edge of summer
    while leaves rock-a-bye
Wandering on the inside

The sun takes a deep breath
    descending into her cradle
making way for the new moon
    In sync with my forlorn swoon

I sit and ponder days gone by
    thinking of earlier smiles
Fall is soon to be here reminding
    me that all things change
It is nature's way of renewal
    and I am her child

Everything moves forward
    Everything is on its way to some place
Somewhere left behind is a memory
    Today, I am the keeper of records

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

1 posted 2005-08-22 10:46 AM

Note, this is a rewrite based on a suggestion from Bodger. Feedback welcome.

Thank you Bodger.

SG

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2005-08-22 10:53 AM

This is just simply perfect.

Fall is soon to be here reminding
    me that all things change
It is nature's way of renewal
    and I am her child

You dip into the past, yet remain in the present.   Perfect.

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

3 posted 2005-08-22 11:06 AM

Thank you Littlewing.

SG

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2005-08-23 10:18 AM

SG, I concur with our Little-Winged friend! ~ and I am saving this poem to savor again and again...

EA

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

5 posted 2005-08-23 10:31 AM

You describe it just the way I feel....I love it...Absolutely wonderful...*big hugs*

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

6 posted 2005-08-23 11:28 AM

EA

Thank you for your feedback. I am always thrilled when you give me your input.
Angel that you are

SG

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

7 posted 2005-08-23 11:31 AM

Startime55,

Thank you for peeking in and your reply. Moments like these are gifts, I'm honored to share with you!

SG

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