Open Poetry #36 |
Me & You (Yin & Yang Blues) |
soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
(Can't recall if I posted this one before or not...didn't see it when I searched. Ah well, here we go anyway. For Beth.) Me & You (Yin & Yang Blues) You're the yang to my yin I'm dying to open my love to you but you won't let me in I know but here I go adoring you from afar you drive me completely crazy but you swim around in my heart you're unaware of the warmth I've hidden there For you if you want it to light you up inside don't run and hide and say save it for a rainy day baby can't you see it's true I'm talking about me and you You're the sun to my moon I'm sighing this pretty love song for you but you won't hear my tune I know but don't ever go please don't disappear or you won't drive my crazy anymore will you please come here and notice my eyes wandering over you till you realize I'm for you if you want me to be filling you up with light don't run into the night and sigh it's too late to give it a try darling don't be so naive it can be true this thing called me and you "Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I know Beth will enjoy this as much as I did, and there really ARE people who fit together as Yin and Yang! Much enjoyed this 'Blues'....~S~ Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
*agreeing* there sure are and this reads like a tune. Put some music to it. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You know there is nothing better than having a song written for you, I know that feeling, and loved it. Beth will indeed love this one. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I can hear the music behind this.... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Zach, this is awesome! Loved the title...just perfect! |
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