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I'm a Swinger
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I'm a Swinger |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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I’m a Swinger And swing upon this life’s trapeze Doing summersaults in flight with ease And though I land upon my feet I feel the summersault not complete Some how I feel the turn I do Is not correct the yearn I view And turning in the broader sense Does not fulfill the recompense There is this flight within the air That lacks the wings to keep it there And always lands me with a thud That rises up a mess of mud This turns the daylight into night With only stars to feed me light And I am caught within a veil That slack the sails I haul in sail And time has no concern for you When counting down the time you do |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Talk about starting the morning off with a smile! That's exactly what your title gave me... and then your poem? Sigh. Thank you, Sy! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Just a'swingin.....There's a little girl In our neighborhood, her name is Becky Johnson and she's really lookin' good.....just a'swangin.....ya remember that John Anderson diddy Sigh?....hope you're doing well...and just keep on'a swingin....(does your bride know you're into this?) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine    Toerag Of course she does she's the one that pushes me. LOL |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
hehehhee, Toe took the words right outa my mouth, does she know you like swingin? hehe ahhh hem, now back to the serious me...yes, dear man, swing, swing, unto life given wings...for the marvel of your words, start my mornings like Mario Andredi's race car Hugs |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Don't worry too much about not making the turns right...when you take us flying with you we soar with ease among the stars of your mind...Wonderful writing...*big hugs* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Then it's off we go into the wild blue yonder. Good morning sweet. Startime55 Then you are off on a trip. LOL |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
A light and lovely read today Seymour Thankyou for this. hugging you, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this reminds me of when my friends and I would go swinging either in the rain or after it, just so we could jump off the swings into the mud puddles... my mom was so mad but it was so fun! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Thank you dear. passing, Good for you. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You wrote the way I feel, Sy...thank you.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this so much, my friend! *S* With your words, I feel the rush of air against my face... and those few moments of flight that are over far too soon... Beautiful! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
LOL.......this make me chuckle. Glad you touch down here with your words. ....jo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I need to learn how to do that... land on my feet It's usually the other end for me  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Ant that the truth.Thank you sweet. iliana Did I splash any mud. LOL Midnitesun, Just turn the other cheek. LOL thank you sweet. |
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