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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Once Once I carved upon a tree The letters I and S for me Surrounded by the shape of heart The symbol of a loving start My oh my how it has grown Who would have guessed its overtone? Twice the size to look and see This heart inscribed upon a tree And as I thought upon its date Its years and age and of my fate A tear slipped down my lower lid And caught upon my symbols ID She still is carved upon my heart And never left it from the start Today we hold our hands in thrall But mostly it’s to stay a fall The carving stays in deep the core But cannot speak the years of awe |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
tried to highlight one line but could not, as each line was better then the next and the next...I tell you true, you have the most sensitive and understanding heart, and it has surely grown....well done and articulated Sy...thank you for loving her so...  [This message has been edited by LeeJ (08-17-2005 09:13 AM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
*shaking my head* You are the sugar in my coffee. sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
She still is carved upon my heart And never left it from the start Today we hold our hands in thrall But mostly it’s to stay a fall The carving stays in deep the core But cannot speak the years of awe ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This just makes me heart smile.... and reminds me of how adorable you two were that day on the boat...both of yours warmth and sense of humor, I could have stayed for hours listening to your lifes adventures.  *ww*  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ You and your answers are a delight. Good morning sweet. serenity, And you the waters of my rhymes. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, And you are one of my best adventures, for I've left my Randy with you. WW |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Such a loving write...what else could a woman ask for...  to you bothM |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, It's not the first that counts but the last. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Randy says hes ready for some adventure.  |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, your honey is so lucky to have you. Do you write her a lot of poetry? If so, I'll bet she loves it. Hugs, Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Just name it. WW |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel, Strangly she does not. LOL |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Oh yes...how I love this poem....A timeless masterpiece you have created for the love of your heart both in words and a carving that will last beyond this life...Absolutely magnificent....*big hugs* |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The carving grew... as did your love. *S* This is such a beautiful write, my friend... from such a beautiful heart! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime55 I just love big hugs. suthern, You are a sweet heart. |
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