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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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when the hugging tree broke her middle from the winds you hadn't worshiped you cried for your ocean parts and folded your butterfly metals into paperclip fajita's frigid thawlessnees you said was your fast frozen safe place you put it on as a cold shirt night when you wrote me poems and told me not to look at your eyes or other places there was driftwood rubbing itself tear sided smooth on the dark stones you imagined all men to wear as buttons on their long coats when they ride I kicked sand in your bed so your skin would know me later without the oilskin imagination when the waves would come for dinner and make you stay over til a sundown thawsday morning ________________ dark |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow  awesome stuff here Dark |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
humble thanks lady..you smile me |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I kicked sand in your bed so your skin would know me later ~*~ I don't think one would forget you any day of the week... Excellent word play... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sunsmile...thanks to you lady friend for the visit from your eyes |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
whoa I shall say nothing else but, I do not know how you do it?! excellante Good Morning |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms lee j..damn I like your whoa's..thanks ms for the review.. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
when the hugging tree broke her middle from the winds you hadn't worshiped you cried for your ocean parts and folded your butterfly metals into paperclip fajita's frigid thawlessnees you said was your fast frozen safe place you put it on as a cold shirt night when you wrote me poems and told me not to look at your eyes or other places there was driftwood rubbing itself tear sided smooth on the dark stones you imagined all men to wear as buttons on their long coats when they ride I kicked sand in your bed so your skin would know me later without the oilskin imagination when the waves would come for dinner and make you stay over til a sundown thawsday morning ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ damn............ sometimes you just leave me moth mute... thats some impressive muse ya got there poet sir...with eyes that see right thru.... and only you could have written this personif and analogy... and folded your butterfly metals into paperclip fajita's Im not asking for a moment, all I want is time I want to take this lonely, but Ive no place to be so baby let me breathe you in and take you into me |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS "frigid thawlessnees you said was your fast frozen safe place you put it on as a cold shirt night when you wrote me poems and told me not to look at your eyes" You're so fine!  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms jm...thank you ms for the review..am pleased that you enjoyed this window, thank you. ______________ ms martie..good morning lil neighbor..thank you for walking over and tapping on the glass here.. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
WOW!! You sure like to leave a lasting impression...Hopefully the sand was hot beach sand and would radiate some of its heat for thawing...Powerful words used brilliantly...*big hugs* |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
you do have a way with words  i always enjoy reading ` My spirit will rise |
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