Gentle Breeze and Gale Force Winds

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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2005-08-17 05:41 PM

I sail beyond the sunset
Drifting on the thoughts of your words,
A sweet breeze of you parting kiss
A whisper in the wet
Of the unspoken yet well heard
Leaving with mental bliss.

The stars need not guide me
Since home pulled me gently back
Yet I left a trail of thoughts behind
To where I stayed so happy
Before drifting across this trail of black
Yellow bricked in my mind.

Then in the new sunrise
Much to my surprise
The winds of change did rearrange,
Why I don’t know
Gale winds did blow
Stiff bitter cold had taken hold.

How could you now dismiss
Those things ending with a kiss,
Gale force winds carrying them away,
I thought we were building a tomorrow
And now to my great sorrow,
To you just another day.

When will I find a true gentle breeze
Where the I that I am does please
And though a kiss is just a kiss
The departing doesn’t dismiss
The emotions before sunset
Things that you forget.

Gloom

This is for Simon, a friend,
who was roughly treated when attempting to find love.
I can’t take the Ice Pick from the eye,
But there are women out there that respect a man like you,
I just hope you find one.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2005-08-17 06:02 PM

there are friends, and then there are friends
like you, who feel and understand, and reach out with a hug
a kind write, Professor

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-08-17 06:05 PM

wow Gloom...very well done
much enjoyed

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

3 posted 2005-08-17 06:06 PM

Simon says ...

a deep look within.

All answers rest upon the wind ...

CT

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2005-08-17 06:17 PM

very nice to see this caring
sharing side of you Professor.

Nicely done indeed.

yesterday is gone
tomorrow doesn't exist

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2005-08-17 11:14 PM

He must be a sweet soul....hope he finds what he is looking for. Lovely poem, Gandolf the Gray..........

....jo

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2005-08-18 09:39 PM

hope he enjoyed your thoughtful words~~

M

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

7 posted 2005-08-18 09:50 PM

Thank you Midnitesun,
I just toss out words
Not much on hugs,
Pleased you enjoyed

Thank you, Passing Shadows,
Pleased you enjoyed

Thank you, ctowen,
Simon says he will look in on the poem
I sure your responses will comfort him

Thank you, Gentle Spirit,
Always nice to be seen
By such nice persons

Thank you, iliana
He is a kind and gentle man
I hope he finds what completes him.
The grayness thanks you

Thank you, Nakdthoughts,
I hope he does also,
I am pleased that you liked them

Gloom

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2005-08-18 11:13 PM

Yet I left a trail of thoughts behind
To where I stayed so happy
Before drifting across this trail of black
Yellow bricked in my mind.

~*~

But that you write
for a friend
speaks much
even if you're not one
"much" on hugs.

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