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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I prefer the women of shadows that walk along the dark sidewalks wearing purples and blues with their faces hidden carrying secrets in their bellies thay are the dancers of dawns that linger after the love is gone and make their shapes change on the walls with the sun and present their damp offerings to the desert of their men when there is no water left in the rivers of dreams and those panting famishers plead for the khat of spurned perdition just to sooth their hopeless thirsts _______________ dark scribblenote: garden of afterhours at the round room a tribute to the lounge crews and other after hours blessings that bring the dark khat coffees to soldiers without armor [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (08-17-2005 08:53 AM).] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
is it a drop of hope she dandgles? or just another tease for the thirsty man  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this sadly reminds me of a man who told me face to face, that woman "our age", are so desprate, so starved for attention and love that it has become an open field of pleasure for him... You don't want to know, how very badly, I wanted to send him home, singing soprano... Sorry... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms inky..seems she is always there with her back to my windows...thanks babe ________________ ms lee j..am proud to say you mistook my admiration for a special shift vintage here.. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
yer dangerous, yanno that? Calling all khats, like this--you khan never be too careful. (But they do get under your skin, don't they?)  This is soooooooooo sexy, but then? It is your forte' lovie.  Loved this. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
shhh am not fortee yet well maybe just barely thanks serene one for reading between the lines |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
thay are the dancers of dawns that linger after the love is gone and make their shapes change on the walls with the sun ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ahhh the view thru your eyes... dark glasses and all. Im not asking for a moment, all I want is time |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
do you approve ms..of my kd's and the hand prints the make when lingering for a glance of dances? Thank you lady friend |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Yes I do agree.....very sexy!! "and make their shapes change" I'm pretty flexible.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sexy ms nine..you do stir my imagination thank you |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Sensuality is evident in this enjoyable poem as is alway true when reading your delightful words...*big hugs* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms vandan..thanks to you.. ______________ startime, you bless me thank you so much |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I knew a good Katz once...  it knew me, too! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I prefer the women of shadows that walk along the dark sidewalks wearing purples and blues with their faces hidden carrying secrets in their bellies thay are the dancers of dawns that linger after the love is gone and make their shapes change on the walls with the sun and present their damp offerings yanno babe, you have this way about you that just drives me nuts!!! Your writing is sooo smooth (yah, I know...my fav song...) Enjoyed the views through your eyes... and btw? purple? I LOVE purple.... yesterday is gone |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sunshine...katz are such a tea'se huh, thank you lady friend _____________ ms gs, so pleased that you enjoy this. and yes the purple makes the pale night lovely thanks to you lady |
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