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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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i'm going to speak from my heart i'm going to tell you that i can't breathe when you sit next to me that i can't think when you speak to me and your blue eyes tear through me like you've known me forever but still know nothing it breaks my heart not being able to let my words my voice into your heart it breaks my heart not telling you you're keeping me together that this connection through the absence of one is both my savour and my downfall |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
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God Chelsea, this aches... -------------------------- that i can't think when you speak to me and your blue eyes tear through me like you've known me forever but still know nothing -------------------------- feeling this one with you dear gal... very well stated, perfectly written. yesterday is gone |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...the beginning and ending verses just rocked! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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