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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Appearing in mist I can see the face of love. I don't want to wake. A meaning, hidden? How I wish that you were here I dream of you, still. Some believe in destiny some believe in fate but I believe that happiness is something we create.. and I'm not gonna wait.... theres gotta be something more. {sugarland} |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
It's amazing isn't it, how some faces manage to stay in front of the mist?  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
it sure is Kacy...  and some faces, some glimpses into anothers soul just can't be forgotten.... i'm tired, woke up tired Life is wearin' me smooth down to the bone No rest for the weary, ya just move on I guess you just keep goin' till your gone Tired, lord i'm tired Tired, lord i'm tired (TOBY) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (08-16-2005 02:15 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I find those who 'touch' us deeply for the briefest span of time sometimes remain with us the longest. And when we let our dreams randomly search the database of our heart, these people will inevitably resurface from time's mist. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautiful...like a child's touch museum...within the adult of us...this brought sheer pleasure and dreamy emotions... smiling on all who read... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I love the dreamy surrealness of this poem. I too have an unforgettable face that appears out of the misty darkness of my nights whilst I am sleeping... Loveya! Linda |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
sad, yet lovely Donna. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Oh, Donna, I do know what you mean! Good one.  ...jo |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
hugs and thanks all.. Kacy? big sighhhhhhhhh you said it. no matter how briefly, some people leave impression that last in thought forever... thank you for understanding. It's almost like the hard times circle 'round A couple drops and they all start coming down Yeah, I might feel defeated, I might hang my head I might be barely breathing - but I'm not dead Tomorrow's another day And I'm thirsty anyway So bring on the rain...Jo Dee |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
a poignant write just wonderful. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Absolutely lovely Donna, so much conveyed in so few words. Mxx ~i want for myself your trembling~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks Chelsea, I appreciate it much. Bella? c'mere...  thanks...luv ya. yesterday is gone |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
we may never stop dreaming  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ah Dixie... sometimes our dreams seem to be all we have and can hold on to..... thanks gal. yesterday is gone |
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