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The Last Dance
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The Last Dance |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Last Dance The lights were low the music slow Their garments clung from head to toe They wove their bodies in a twist From head to chest from hips to wrist The music played their bodies swayed The fantasy of sex inlaid With eyes half closed and nose to nose Their arms slid down where skin exposed Round and round in rhythms heat Their bodies never missed a beat Hypnotic in its thrust of play Firing up the matters grey And when the music stopped the dance Their bodies stood in frozen trance Holding to the essence field That wrapped them in a feel of yield I danced like this once in a wile A wile that always brings a smile |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
 Mr. T., you cut a fine form both on the dance floor and on the written page...  To Love & To tripping the light fantastic! EA  |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
This poem is sensually beautiful and made me feel like dancing...What a delightful feeling that is first thing in the morning...*big hugs* |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I often write of dancing, and enjoyed this. Jason |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
As with all of your poems, Seymour, this is just beautiful. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
An entrancing dance from our perpetually passionate poet... sighing Isabel is a lucky woman.  Maybe one day, I too, can go to the ball.  |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour,  What a beautiful dance you dance once in a wile... And? No wonder the wile always brings a smile!! I think I like this one as well as any of yours I've ever read, but I am a hopeless romantic. Hugs,  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Lol.....me, too....but it's been a wile....lol. Seriously, the dance that came to mind when I read this will never be forgotten and you write it beautifully!  ....jo |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Loved this one Sy. Put me in mind of a couple I once saw dancing at a little outdoor place in Flagler beach. Ocean breeze, nice clear evening, good music. Strangers to me but there was something about the way they danced. You could feel they had a great feeling for it. Whether lovers, married or just good chemistry, I did not know, but they were a joy to watch. It would be a joy to see you and your love twirl once again around the dance floor. best to you martyjo |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well for goodness sake, you sure fired up my grey matter, no matter, it's hot out, and I could use a cold shower. Oh I remember this too, and will again in a wile. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Thank you my Angel of the north. Startime55 Big hugs back. Jason So glad you enjoyed. SmartChick Thank you sweety. serenity And we will dance to the music of poetic licence. garysgirl Me too iliana It's one of my favorate wiles. Sharon I'm sure you will in a wile. latearrival Enjoyed your reply. Thank you |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And your words gave me a smile... Isabel is definitely a lucky lady! *S* Beautiful write, my friend! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Thank you sweety. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy...It must have been the tango! Such a sensually pleasing dance and poem! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie You guessed it. |
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