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Open Poetry #36

Surrender

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2005-08-13 02:59 AM

so many sad memories left behind,
you have gone now to a place
I cannot follow,
In the arms of the other,
You sleep so well tonight,

It leaves one to wonder-
Did my love surrender?

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2005-08-13 10:53 AM

Sadness flows into your question...Wonderful writing from the heart...*hugs*

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

2 posted 2005-08-13 10:55 AM

It does not sound like you surrendered to me.Nice write.

Jason

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

3 posted 2005-08-18 12:11 PM

I think of past lovers and wonder....I wonder if they still think of me...I enjoyed this piece of life and reality---what we all think when unguarded...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2005-08-19 12:35 PM

Nice writing...James

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